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The writing is good, however, the reader is caught up in the adventure because the writer is “;changing her life”; yet though we get a beautiful description of the flights, the life change is left as a question mark. I appreciate that the title is First Flight, but the piece would have carried so much more impact if she told the reader what awaited her.
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