That room was so bright and cheery - loved it. My favorite was the tiled entrance floor. I was thinking of something similar for our place, so I';ll be filing away this episode for reference later. Looking forward to next week';s episode already :)
The very heart of your writing while appearing agreeable originally, did not work very well with me after some time. Someplace throughout the sentences you were able to make me a believer unfortunately just for a short while. I still have got a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one might do well to help fill in all those breaks. If you actually can accomplish that, I will definitely be amazed.